2005-03-30, 04:28
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that rocked
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2005-04-05, 01:12
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i love how easy it was to read this. i allowed me to Perfectly play out the whole story from start to finish  |
2005-04-09, 17:06
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i just read it again, three times in a row. write more like this, please. and soon.
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2005-04-09, 23:21
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I don't understand how she's screaming not only after he sliced her throat, but again after he tore it out. Maybe I'm a stickler for details.
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2005-04-09, 23:45
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meh
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2005-04-10, 14:47
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when is more going to be written? I know the thread is like a year old but still - i guess quality over quantity......
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2005-04-11, 19:38
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Originally Posted by active corpse fucker
when is more going to be written? I know the thread is like a year old but still - i guess quality over quantity......
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woah, i thought it was new, but i havnt been to this forum in a looong time, since before last week anyway.
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2005-07-03, 12:51
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Havent you heard pigs scream?
If pigs and sheep can still scream like crazy while their throat is slit and inside out Im sure people can too; since afterall, they are lower life forms than us. But then again, my family always reached in and tore out their screaming tools.
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2005-07-11, 23:07
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I don't know whether to freak out or laugh. I think I'll do both just to be safe. I also must find a way to resist the uncontrollable urge to sahemesly steal your lyrics. haha, just kidding, I wouldn't really do that. maybe without your knowledge but not publicly like this. hahaha.
good job, easy to read, flows naturally, very powerful imagery. the title is quite deceiving, I thought this was gonna be some joke or something.
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