
2004-11-11, 01:38
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Originally Posted by Brutur
Thanks  , Although it was not yet completely finished, i still posted it. Space/ Planets / Time are my favorite Topics for Lyrics. At the moment I'm writing lyrics for an Astral Metal Project. Its still a one-man Project, but if anyone here is interested....
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 why oh why am i not in bonn, germany? i love space/astro/time kind of stuff and i shred a mean guitar too
ah well. im a one-man as we speak too...
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2004-11-18, 19:53
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this weeks topic.
hate.
should be an easy one.
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2004-11-19, 11:49
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Your transparent facade cant be denied
the insidious fiction, you bring upon yourself
When your only aspiration is deception
How do you know yourself?
You fill the void, play the part
coerce yourself to conform
narcissistically driven, but how far?
To which extent is your existence
Dependant on approval?
Driven by ratification, only to serve all
is insignificancy really something to fear?
Dependancy on others will be your collapse.
When you fill the niche, how do you know yourself?
Mine was more about pity than hate, but this kid really is a douche
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2004-11-19, 13:20
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ah you care about me
Pretty good shit though man.
(is your sig supposed to say trendy ?)
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2004-11-19, 13:23
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Yeah.......I need to learn to copy/paste more.
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2004-11-19, 13:44
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where'd you copy it from?
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Imagine all the people
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2004-11-19, 14:47
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Its an anal cunt song, but I made it better 
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2004-11-19, 20:29
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well that's just plagarism.
f-
as i sit and dwell upon your choices
I find i sink lower
I feel the rising
yet i feel myself fallin
accepting
too easy
I turn my back
cannot accept that path
I bear my eyes,
the window to my being
for you to lash out at.
I yeild myself to you
to your anger
I am the target
of your demise
It's easier to hate
than to love
To accept
It's hard
a choice
of life.
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No religion too,
Imagine all the people
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2004-11-19, 21:08
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If you added a Morphing into the Primal type riff, I'd buy it =)
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2004-11-19, 21:12
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I'm drunk, and i designed tthat "poem" to go
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2004-11-20, 08:02
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FUCKING HOFF-STYLE!!!!!!!
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You will die
Torture gets boring after a while
Feel the blood vanish, all as you die
I'm sick of your whoring, you behave as a child
You obstinate cunt, no punishment is mild
You will die, if you fall in my grasp!
A hold of your neck, i'm watching you gasp!
I see red, my eyes full of hate!
To drown in your blood that is your fate!
A bullet in your head!
You will soon be dead!
No remorse, i eat your corpse and now you will fucking DIE!!
DIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This was my first attempt at a metal text with the theme hate. What do you think.
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2004-11-20, 08:13
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definately sounds metal-ish.
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Imagine there's no countries,
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No religion too,
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