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Old 2004-01-12, 20:23
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Once and for all, you will all finally die.

Eh, I wonder if this is better than what I've seen in the past few weeks...



Once and for All

As the rain burns my skin and humors
In the absence of good flesh,
Die, Die, Die, and fear the wrath of terror
From beyond the mechanical world.
Hark. The demon’s whispering, chanting, calling
Now as the everclear night begins to rant
Upon this pathetic face.
Bury the fury of the growing radicle of this
Despicable earthly life.

Deep within the shadowland of god,
Sacral chants ring through the bad acid rain.
Forever pain held in the morning air,
As it reaches its peak thus ending night.
Cast our Last Shadow.

Death defiant and cutting the radius of Earth;
Reap the whirlwind and fuck this....
Sinking below the mist and feeling the humidity swell
Around this naked body.
Now, as the light itself begins to fade again.

And the heavy air qualms my insides.
And the growing rage inhabits my soul.
The fire burns brighter.
And I smile at my new becoming.

Oh fear of unhappiness, I scorch the breeze from afar,
Not long before it melts your bread.
How this evil wind sinks into the abyss of darkness,
My home, home sweet home.

Here in death’s domain drinking blood as wine
That burns like everclear.
Repent your sins now, for I am a god, die,
And fear my powers of Terror.
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.


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Old 2004-01-17, 19:24
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Twenty-seven views and not one reply...is it really that good?!?!

Yeah, thanks guys, you make me feel smart.
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.


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Old 2004-01-17, 19:31
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that sucked never make a song again.... nah it was good I guess yea it sounds good to me. except for the die die die part that made it sound horrible. and a few otehr parts. But thats just my opinion.
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Old 2004-01-17, 20:17
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.


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Old 2004-01-17, 20:27
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I don't mean to be rude, but this is not only rather melodramatic, but even nonsensical at places. "Everclear night begins to rant?"
"Powers of Terror?"

(Not that anything I've written would be much less dramatic or more comprehensible, but those are mah THOUGHTSES.)

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Old 2004-01-17, 20:57
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I want you to die.

I feel so hurt now... you too powers
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Old 2004-01-17, 23:56
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I don't mean to be rude, but this is not only rather melodramatic, but even nonsensical at places. "Everclear night begins to rant?"
"Powers of Terror?"

(Not that anything I've written would be much less dramatic or more comprehensible, but those are mah THOUGHTSES.)

Everclear is a horrid liquor and it doesn't taste good. So it made sense to me as a metaphor, and what's wrong with my name boy. Terror has power. Terrorism kills people. Terror places fear into your heart. And it sounds cool.
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.


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Old 2004-01-18, 08:24
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Whatever you say.
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Old 2004-01-19, 11:11
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The Christian Life guy, not you powers.
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Old 2004-01-19, 13:43
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Hrm. Well, let's see if you can understand a nice bit of ASCII art...

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Old 2004-01-21, 17:28
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Hrm. Well, let's see if you can understand a nice bit of ASCII art...

n|nn


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Old 2004-02-04, 14:20
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Those are some of the best lyrics I've ever read!!!! I definately feel the emotion!! Awsome!! Are you in a band Powers? I'm not, but I can jam real wicked!! Do you do vocals, I play axe. If I can get a band formulated soon I may have an opening up type gig for an on the rise underground band. They are currenly in the studio with none other than Dave Ellefson of Megadeth as we speak. I think they're planning a brief fall through winter tour in support of their new album due out this summer. Problem is I need a band!! I have a good amount of melodic death/thrash riffs and even some nice acoustic pieces. If anyone here reads this and is interested please email me at alextello124@hotmail.com. only serious and professional attitudes please.
If I can get a band and a demo Dave Ellefson will hear it!!!!! This is not bullshit.
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Old 2004-02-04, 15:09
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.


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Old 2004-02-07, 17:51
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'ey p'o't' ! I liked this. It had a lot more to speak of imagerywise than the shitfaced piece you posted. MUSTA BEEN HARD TO THINK THEN !!! I like the way you take a thought and color it up with shading and bold color. It gives it a lot of life for a death song. But the die, die die, has GOT to go. No way, no how. I don't like that.

One thing I like about the way you do your imagery is you use everyday language and can paint extreme pictures with it. That's cool and something I generally cannot do unless that certain spirit takes over and does my writing. That happens about once every 5 years.

Cool piece.

And you guys ---fight nice. There's a lady present. Or I'll knock you all in the friggin' head !
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