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Old 2004-10-03, 14:37
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A poem I wrote whilst bored....:)

I am the horse of the night
I am darker than black beauty in a dark room at night
Galloping into the distant sun
Testicles, large, mean, round
Bouncing up and down as I gallop
Fearless through the hills!

Where are you my jockey?
Be you in the hands of another ass other than myself?
Do not leave me be on my own
I miss thee with every gallop
I miss the fondling you bring to me when we meet

My head, as long as my journey
My journey, as long as my face
Your cock, the centre of my dreams
Which land be you in my jockey?

My tail blows gently in the wind
Swaying gently like a flacid phallus
Oh how I miss the days you blew me too
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Old 2004-10-03, 14:39
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theres an entire forum for this kind of stuff you stupid infected cunt.

EDIT: it fucking sucks anyway.

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Old 2004-10-03, 14:45
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haha, fucktard.
And that was messed up. I have never read anything that contained a horse and his balls.
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Old 2004-10-03, 14:48
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Gee guys, thanks, I knew you'd love it!
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Old 2004-10-03, 14:57
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shut the fuck up
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Old 2004-10-03, 15:05
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This is so touching, thanks for makin' me feel welcome. Faggots
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Old 2004-10-03, 15:09
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Old 2004-10-03, 15:16
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You have a serious attitude problem dude
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Old 2004-10-03, 15:19
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either that or you are just a gaping cunt
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Old 2004-10-03, 15:23
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shut up andrew, you have the brain mass of a fucking centipede and your gay. thx!

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Old 2004-10-03, 15:23
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Quote:
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You have a serious attitude problem dude

He does. He's also a raging homosexual. I would keep my distance from him if I were you.
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Old 2004-10-03, 16:01
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The poetry forum is that way *points to the poetry forum*

Hoestly, how did you miss it? You have to scroll past the bastard thing in order to get to the chit-chat forum. If I were you I'd cut back a little with the furious masturbating sessions, otherwise you'll be completely blind before you get to drinking age.
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you spelled "honestly" wrong.

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Old 2004-10-03, 16:06
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moved to the poetry forum.

Uddingal shut the fuck up.
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Old 2004-10-03, 16:08
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Fantastic work. I foresee a new revolution in poetry: all the structurelessness of free verse with the pretentious, antiquated phrasing and vocabulary of Victorian poets. I hope to see you in publication soon, William Carlos Swinborne.

Seriously, this is an offense to poetry, humorous or otherwise. It didn't have to be, but the total lack of discipline, the unnecessary psuedo-pretention, the piss-poor phrasing, the 'other' redundancy, and basically the total bungling of an otherwise brilliant topic - a homosexual relationship between a horse and its jockey - made it one. However, if you persevere and squeeze a diamond out of this mess, I hope to see it posted in the proper forum. Since you're obviously going for a parody of 19th century poetry, try using a meter.
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Old 2004-10-03, 16:10
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you spell "pseudo" wrong :(

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IF YOU POST IN THE FUCKING TITLE BOX AGAIN I WILL SEND A VIRUS TO YOUR CONPUTER!!!
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Old 2004-10-03, 16:21
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Ok. the fuck learned how to type in the box, the song sucks and thats it.

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