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Old 2004-06-09, 21:27
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" You Can't Tell Me How I Feel Inside "

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" You Can't Tell Me How I Feel Inside "

There's no more words that I can say
You listen but don't hear
And you've never comprehended
What I've felt for so long

You want no freedom in my thinking
You want me to smile and nod
But that ain't my style anymore
I realize that now

You say you can only be you and you'll do as you please
Well, someday you may do it alone without me
So keep up your game that makes you win as a loser
I know what I feel inside
And you can't tell me how I feel inside.

I've cried myself to sleep sometimes
You've all but destroyed the ties
You've tried to humiliate me
And make me feel like I'm the one who's wrong.

This isn't a family we're living in
There's nobody's happier than we are
And you're happy to have a partner to lead down your path
I quit travelling the one you chose

You say you can only be you and you'll do as you please
Well, someday you may do it alone without me
So keep up your game that makes you win as a loser
I know what I feel inside
And you can't tell me how I feel inside.

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Old 2004-06-10, 13:48
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nice. i like. i think it's that i know exactly what you're saying. i recently had an incident where everyone thought they knew what my motives were. well, they were wrong and that started a lot of nasty rumors and ruined my reputation. so that's why i like this. I connect with it. so glad to have you back, life was just so boring.
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Old 2004-06-12, 15:42
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another brilliant masterpiece whipped up by an all to familiar artist.....cudos to you LBXXX
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Old 2004-06-12, 19:33
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"all to(o) familiar artist" ???
Oh! Is my slip showing ?!



Thanks guys. Just a spur o' the moment.

Dying_oath, if your life is more exciting because of me you really need to get out more. But thanks .
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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Old 2004-06-14, 07:41
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who gives if it was "oh, just spur of the moment guys" it was awesome. and i'm just makin' a beg deal about it just because, i'm just havein' fun. it's still nice to have you back though.
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Old 2004-06-30, 18:58
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The kick ass-ness!
Only one word can truly describe the beauty of this:

FANTABOULOUSAWESOMEXTREMECOOL!!


Yeah, that's a gay way to say it. IT KICKED ASS! That works! I haven't read a poem or song I don't like today. I think I'll go pick on "Kill The Kids At School"

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