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Old 2003-06-20, 17:09
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"Breathless" -thx 4 reading

I'm going through a dead phase right now poetically but I thought I'd post this piece for you to comment on. I think I've had so much on my mind lately a flurry of words will come out one of these days. At least I'm hoping it will. Anyways, thanks for reading .

"Breathless"

Where can I find my peace inside?
There's a burden unable to be lifted
Like a raging wave hurling across the ocean
That crashes and breaks on a distant shore.
I feel strength and yet my hands tremble
As if I've lifted a mountain with bare hands
And can carry no more.
Breath that I feel at the eye of inner vision.
Air to the very cortex of my brain.
So deep that my soul begs for it for life.
Sneering at the world distastefully.
Wanting nothing more than to take
And mold to my own dimensions
The desires that haunt even as I dream.
I want no more then to calm this storm,
To walk among the shells in the aftermath
That will wash upon the shore.
But the tides have no end.

BJH
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