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Old 2003-02-20, 12:03
abadona abadona is offline
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Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: Vilnius, Lithuania
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true, could be better, but it's not badly written, it's just that the situation is slightly banal - oh, you all bad lovers, you hurt me deep, bla-bla-bla... i'm not hurting your feelings, i just thought - if you would 'hide' the situation, so that it is less obvious what this piece is about, it would improve a lot.
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