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Old 2011-09-28, 23:27
Hugozhor Hugozhor is offline
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Quote:
Originally Posted by L,B'XXX
The last 3 pieces you posted together have a few parts that stumble. Maybe if you read them a little slower or say they out loud you'll see what needs fixed since the other pieces didn't seem to have as many nits.


Could you be more specific. Do you mean grammar or melody flow?
If you mean melody flow. These lyrics are more progressive so some melodies are more complicated.
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