I have three preliminary versions of the same projected song and I can't seem to figure out which feels or flows better. Part of the problem is that significant portions of the song are supposed to have a disjunct and even disorienting feel to them and I'm having a difficult time analyzing my own work.

Just be warned that some of the polytonal passages are a bit strange, and might even feel foreign or uncomfortable, but that's entirely intentional and necessary for the theme of the song.

Thanks for listening.

Version 1
http://www.mediafire.com/?g0d7l72awtda7e8
Version 2
http://www.mediafire.com/?6b7w43eh7e3k87j
Version 3
http://www.mediafire.com/?nyn7tnwlq5exnm8

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