2011-09-20, 17:13
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Senior Metalhead
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Join Date: Jul 2011
Location: Czech republic (Prag)
Posts: 134
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Originally Posted by L,B'XXX
The chorus had a lot of intensity to it. The rest is a little fragmented. I think there's a typo in "No bad I realized."
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I mean "No wrong I realized", like "I didnīt realize something was wrong or bad"
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Originally Posted by L,B'XXX
And these lines don't flow well either thought-wise.
"Losing your chance still wait for your prince
Of never coming true dreams"
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Itīs guite difficult vocal lines in these verses.
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