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Old 2010-12-30, 17:57
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Inspired by LMS

Last Man Standing posted his piece and I got inspired by it. I was going to write a separate piece, but I liked the idea of his piece with my responses. This is purely for fun of it and I take no credit for what he wrote. Mine is in italics. Thanks for reading and commenting if you do either.

Once in love with the world
But now she feels so numb about everything
People disgust her
She lost her passion

Folded wings o'er buried head
Hidden eyes, sunless
Unfeeling yet feeling
Overwhelmed by racing thought


Such emptiness inside of her
Who can fill it
Who can bring passion back into her

Maybe a new love
Maybe a lost love
Maybe just a poem

Unable to find a way out
Fervently reaching
Grasping words, memories


One person can give you the world
And sometimes that same person can take it away
Is that what happened to her

A silken veil of words
Creating images deceptively pure
Hypnotic when spoken with passion's eyes
Cruel ruse


Can a poem turn your world upside down
Can a poem fill your emptiness
Can just a few words change your life completely
Is that what happened to her

Blood transfused through veins
Becoming the artist's rendition
Muse inhaled, embraced, accepted
Frail heart formed by knowing hands


Her face was an art
Her smile was like summer
And her eyes were like spring
Now the face is not an art anymore
And her smile is an autumn breeze
And her eyes cold as winter freeze
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