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Old 2010-07-01, 17:19
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You're welcome. It has a nice flow to it now to me.
I disagree about the oh's. Sometimes I include them when I write because they add a visual note where there wouldn't be one in the reading or sometimes if it's a lead in to a line in one of my more hokey lyrics. Some writers use them and some don't. Some pieces need them in writing and some can be inserted at will when being sung. It's up to you.
Anyways, glad to help out.
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