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Old 2010-06-30, 05:36
Last Man Standing Last Man Standing is offline
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Quote:
Originally Posted by L,B'XXX
Ditch the "thee." It's totally out of place. If it was a period piece then maybe, but it's clearly not.
Is this relative to the lyric? This needs reworked or left out -
"Like the satan fears that you
Realize that He exists"



i acknowledged all your advices ( they were very good - thank you)
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