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Old 2010-06-18, 06:08
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It has a workable structure with perhaps a hint of a good flow.

However. Nothing original and repetitive in a way that doesn't add anything. To be honest it just brought my thoughts to any given emo band of your choice, falsetto screaming with all the soulful power of an enraged beetle.

As for the Dystopia hint, just have a look around the forum. It'll soon be clear.
Listening to Cannibal Corpse and cutting trees with a chainsaw, now that's metal

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