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Old 2010-03-02, 11:15
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Originally Posted by L,B'XXX
I'm going to give this another read later. I'm getting a few ideas from it, but I'm not quite awake yet.
Are there any typos in the first couple lines because that isn't reading smoothly to me?


Just using poetic grammar there. It reads grammatically acceptable to me. I did sit and wonder about it but I am 78% sure that it's gramm. acc..

EDIT: figured it out: most people would normally stick the "to" at the end of that first line.
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