My aforementioned favourite riff sounds so much better with drums They're very well written, overall. They augment the clean section nicely, too; very restrained, nothing too obnoxious or "for the sake of it", and that seems to be the case in general. The fact that this is your first real attempt to create a drum track gives it even more credibility!

The bass is purty, as well. Again, the clean section is complimented well by it.

Good work chief. Any chance of a recorded version?