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Old 2008-07-20, 14:27
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Judgement Day

these are the lyrics to my new death metal song. post your opinons.


Judgement Day:

Intermission of my soul
Rotten flesh peels away
Why should I stand this hell?
Hammer lodged into my skull

Why do I have to go through all this pain?
Decay of my body in your dirty hands

You disgusting beast of torture
Drain my life away from me
Hang my corpse on your wall
You've been caught with bloody red hands

I am not your guinea pig
You disgust me to the core
Inquisition of your ways
Judgement day has finally come!


P.s. i know some of the lines suck. especially the "Why do I have to go through all this pain?" line. that being said, bring on the constructive criticism!
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