Join Date: Jul 2008
these are the lyrics to my new death metal song. post your opinons.
Intermission of my soul
Rotten flesh peels away
Why should I stand this hell?
Hammer lodged into my skull
Why do I have to go through all this pain?
Decay of my body in your dirty hands
You disgusting beast of torture
Drain my life away from me
Hang my corpse on your wall
You've been caught with bloody red hands
I am not your guinea pig
You disgust me to the core
Inquisition of your ways
Judgement day has finally come!
P.s. i know some of the lines suck. especially the "Why do I have to go through all this pain?" line. that being said, bring on the constructive criticism!