Originally Posted by Infinity

you are a really really bad song writer.

seriously, no riff structure, no song structure.

honestly dude, listen to that; listen to that which you have created. it sounds like a noob 1st month guitarist showed his 4 year old brother how to fret a powerchord and then hit the body of the guitar with chopsticks while said brother tried to play.

and honestly man whats up with your drums - in every song you've ever done. they always sound so dumb, like a stoned fat man throwing rocks at a kit or something.