acoustic stuff is nice ... kind of baroque hetfield haha sry that's probably not what you want to hear. real nice though.

when the strings start to take off around bar 96 it gets interesting, kind of like emperor with the intricate runs interlocking.

the finale is kind of plunky and weird without percussion, i'm having trouble envisioning how it's supposed to sound.

this is definitely the most listenable stuff you've posted yet. i think your melodies and counterpoint are really good ... looking forward to you putting some of your parts together into a cohesive song. (with drums too!)