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Old 2007-10-28, 22:24
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I've been working on revision for all my songs, and I wanna see what you guys think. Is this progress or not?

Creature of the Dark Side
Wallowing in cowardice
Preying on the helpless

Pathetic murderer
Our paths have never crossed
Yet you took my life

With a thrust of your saber
You took my heir to the throne
You’ve slain the woman I love

My Masters
How blind can they be
To pardon your malice

I see the flaws in our code
The light is inert
I must fall to end you...

The Jedi way is failure
So I must follow the contrast
My goal masked in blackness

I cannot fall completely
Or I will drown in corruption
My path mustn’t lead to destruction

From Dantooine to Manaan,
I follow the black stench
From Core to Rim,
I search for that wretch

My journey presents obstacles
Some I can use to my own means
Others stifle my power

A woman, lifeless and empty like me
She begs on the street for charity
All I saw was mediocrity

I grappled and ended her
I ascended as she fell

No time to rejoice
An echo in the Force
Follower of the Light
Coming to stop me

(Clean)
Old ally, brother, friend of mine
Your dark agenda agonizes me
There is still time for redemption

No such thing as peace in revenge
The dark side brings only suffering
"There is no emotion, there is peace"
Return to the light, salivate your soul

(growl)
I was nothing but a walking shell
Your stagnation is the true threat
A demonstration is in order
Experience the dark side!

(Synth.: Lightsaber duel layered with Palpatine dialogue from Return of the Jedi; "Young fool. Only now, at the end, do you understand.” ).

The Dark Side brings me victory
Passion is my law, not your serenity
Your frail path has lead to your end

(Clean)
Old ally, brother, friend of mine
Your dark agenda agonizes me
There is still time for redemption

No such thing as peace in revenge
The dark side brings only suffering
"There is no emotion, there is peace"
Return to the light, salivate your soul

(Growl)
He has no right to live
With this blade, I shall give
He has no right to live
With this blade, I shall give

Judgment!

(Anakin Quote, "What have I done?")

(clean)
Old ally, brother, friend of mine
Your dark agenda agonizes me
There is still time for redemption

No such thing as peace in revenge
The dark side brings only suffering
"There is no emotion, there is peace"
Return to the light, salivate your soul

(spoken)
The nightmare is over
Nothing remains but
A stain on my hands

I deserve no pardon for
My ineptitude
No more shall I wield it

My dark path is over
I will remember it best
When I join my loved ones
May our souls receive eternal rest
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Amadeus
It's really sad, all those people who don't understand why we shouldn't act like our enemies. The real victory is not only killing and imprisoning the terrorists, but also letting civilized manners override the lust for revenge, once the battle is over.
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