I wouldn't consider having a rhythm line added, although a few different counter-melodies would enhance the overall sound and add sufficient body.

The piece needs a bit of work but, as I've been stuck in the work/study/drink-in-available-spare-time mode for the best part of three years, it's hard to actually sit down and put one's full force into it.

Plus Powertab (and other tabbing software) is almost completely unfathomable to me!

Anyway, thanks for the comments.

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