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Old 2007-02-22, 16:19
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I'll try doing that, but I personally like blunt material. Just up-front stuff. Then again, this could be because of my poor skills of comprehending metaphors, similes, symbolisms, and so on. It's always been about the plot to me, not the subliminal message.

Plus;

Unleash hell
Slaughter the weak
Destroy this Empire
End this realm

I've been trying to cut down on making long stanzas (is that what they're called?). How could I improve something like this without making it too long?
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It's really sad, all those people who don't understand why we shouldn't act like our enemies. The real victory is not only killing and imprisoning the terrorists, but also letting civilized manners override the lust for revenge, once the battle is over.
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