HAHA

CompelledToLacerate:

I have a hard time getting though this thing because it is way too Star Wars. I'd just recommend that you try and get it across to people who don't even know anything about Star Wars. If you just thow around SW terms and names and all that shit, you catering to a very small audience. Hell, I love the SW Universe just as much as the next guy but I don't have a clue what half the shit you wrote means. I think the point I'm trying to make is: dumb it down for the rest of us. You'll be more effective that way.

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