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Old 2006-09-23, 16:39
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Originally Posted by CompelledToLacerate
Picking up from here, I've written more lyrics;

I must kill the noise!


Verse 2:

A race is nothing without its obstacles
Some I can use to my own means
Others are distractions that stifle my power
Giving him more time

A woman who has lost her life like me
She begs on the street for charity
I look at her, trying to see myself
All I saw was weakness

She laid a hand on me pleading for help
I took that hand and ripped it off
She cried begging for mercy
My hatred gave her death

I grabbed the bitch and stabbed her heart
I felt my power grow as she died
No time to rejoice, there is an echo in the Force
Follower of the Light has come for me...


Chorus: (Done in either a clean voice or different pitch growl, to give the illusion of another person talking in the story/song)

Old ally, brother, friend of mine
Your dark agenda pains me so
There is still time, you can still turn back
Redeem yourself and come back to the light

You will not find peace in your plot for revenge
The dark side brings only suffering, no harmony
Remember, "There is no emotion, there is peace"
Return to the light, for me, for yourself

Verse 3 (Back to the previous growl [aka the dude this story is about]):

I was nothing before, just a fucking cripple
Your way brings stagnation, mine brings me power
It is clear now that you need a demonstration
Experience the dark side, you weak crippled cunt!

(Synth: Lightsaber duel layered with Palpatine dialogue from Return of the Jedi; "Young fool. Only now, at the end, do you understand).

My anger brings me power, brings me strength, brings me victory
Passion is all I need, fuck your peace and your serenity
Your path has lead to your own demise
Death is the only way you will ever learn

(Die!) You weak echo in the Force
(Die!) You are a flaw that needs correcting
(Die!) You now know the pain that I go through
(Chorus voice) STAND DOWN!

(Repeat chorus in the clean/different growl voice)

Bridge to Breakdown (back to original growl):

He's here
I can feel his power
His fear is untamed, and it eats at him slowly
My inner thirst for revenge is quenched


You took my heir, you took my love
You tricked my brethren and didn't pay
Your death will give me strength
The ability need to end my pain

Your skill lacks in focus, you pussy piece of shit...

.... and that's it so far.

The remaining lyrics...

It's no shock you wallow in fear of facing Hell
Nowhere to hide, nowhere to run now
Your life ends here at the stroke of my saber

(Obi-wan quote, "Don't give in to hate, That leads to the Dark Side.")

Stay out of this
My revenge will be done

(Lightsaber slicing noise, scream)

(Anakin Quote, "What have I done?")



I have slayed my nightmare
I hoped for harmony after vengence
That peace didn't remain
Just the blood on my hands

In hopes of serving justice, I served darkness
It pains me that it took so long
I slayed peoplebecause of their frail existance
There remained my reflection on the Dark man's dying corpse

I deserve no right to redemption or forgiveness
After falling, I've learned no contrast holds all answers
I lack the maturity to handle the Force
No more shall I wield it until I forgive myself

My dark path of hate is over
I will remember forever
It's time to lay to rest my loved ones
May their souls and mine be granted eternal tranquility

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Originally Posted by Amadeus
It's really sad, all those people who don't understand why we shouldn't act like our enemies. The real victory is not only killing and imprisoning the terrorists, but also letting civilized manners override the lust for revenge, once the battle is over.
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