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Old 2002-10-07, 05:52
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I didn't like it that much. I couldn't even finish it.......i got really bored by the 3rd paragraph.

The vocabulary is very good, but there's too many metaphors and such....unless you're the writer himself (you), you get kind of lost in what you're trying to get at. It feels like it takes you a whole paragraph just to say one word.

That method of writing is good, but only good when it's not overdone. (my opinion at least) Keep in mind i don't like black metal......and i understand that most black metal lyrics are all like this......so yeah.
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Through me you pass into the city of woe
Through me you pass into eternal pain
Through me among the people lost for ay
Justice the founder of my fabric moved
To rear me was the task of power divine
Supremest wisdom, and primeval love
Before me things create were none, save things
Eternal, and eternal I endure
All hope abandon, ye who enter here

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