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Old 2002-10-07, 02:54
morbid_death
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its good to see people are getting a little more serious with wat they write. i liked it all although, were you stuck for ideas when you did;


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She comes to play what she likes...
dance over sharp blades
while I drink a cup of wine
beheading childs ... screams ... buried in the graveyard ...


not bad, but just seems as if you got stuck for ideas and turned something somewat poetic into a bit of a 'gore fest' hehe
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