2002-10-07, 02:54
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its good to see people are getting a little more serious with wat they write. i liked it all  although, were you stuck for ideas when you did;
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She comes to play what she likes...
dance over sharp blades
while I drink a cup of wine
beheading childs ... screams ... buried in the graveyard ...
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not bad, but just seems as if you got stuck for ideas and turned something somewat poetic into a bit of a 'gore fest'  hehe  |