
2006-06-02, 15:04
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The Man Who Is, MGI.
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Join Date: Jul 2004
Posts: 2,220
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Yeah you definately need to use more imaginative language.
Also check through the way it's written and change it so it makes sense.
"i bang my sex into hers" this line cracks me up for some reason. 
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Originally Posted by ImBored
I feel a bit arabic spending 30 minutes in the toilet.
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