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Old 2006-06-02, 06:24
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Originally Posted by No Heart
and I let on last word escape my lips


You forgot the "sweet mystery of life, at last I've found hiiiimmmmm!"

Yeah, this was dumb. I rarely say it, but it's not romantic. It's not a turn-on. It's just description. "she reached her orgasm" --if that's not teeny-bopper stuff I don't know what is. It sure sizzles my somethingorother--not! Add some metaphor. Make it intriguing. Do something with it. Toss it in your bottom drawer or line your birdcage! I KNOW from reading your other stuff you can do much better than this so do it!

Wally, thanks for my first major laugh of the day. Your line was poetic! So much imagery! Too much imagery in fact! lol
My eldest son's bipolar website:

-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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