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Old 2006-04-19, 23:23
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My biggest problem with it, is the lack of progression through out the piece. You have the same main theme or rhythm.. Which isn't bad.. (kind of weird) but thats another story. But a song should progress more than just the... lead over the guitar. It was a good start at changing hte pace later in the song. But thats much too late (or so it seems).

Its not different really than a "Regular song" I.e.... A chorus a verse.. Kinda thing. That progresses a song.. it doesn't neccesarly have to be.. Verse chorus, verse chorus. Kinda thing. But it creates variation in the piece. Additional instruments. (maybe a percussion) would be good. For instance maybe if you kept time.. half way through with a... triangle or something, that would be cool.

Check this song out. This is one i made. It might give you some ideas.
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