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Old 2006-01-03, 06:20
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Well, when you said "the little monster" I wasn't sure, but I know I refer to my kids as "little monsters" even though they're big monsters now. I'm torn with my opinion of it since I'm not sure of the nature of the loss. It's very basic emotion and words, but if it's something that's hearfelt, which it seems to be, it says what it needs to say to get it across. I'm not fond of pieces printed out this way, but at least you capitalized to break up the phrasing. This really didn't need it though since the meter was good.
I hope it's not a tragic little piece.
My eldest son's bipolar website:

-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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