its ok, but if it were me doing it, i would use a shape more like this:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v258/user010101/r.jpg

and i would get a 24 fret neck

and i would paint it

but, i still think it looks okay

lol, btw, this is gonna sounds pretty stupid, but you look a lot different to how i had expected you to looks like