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Old 2002-07-09, 01:44
Smleatyaelr Smleatyaelr is offline
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Join Date: Jun 2002
Location: north carolina
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just like everyone says in most of the replys
I like it.
poetry is an art
who cares if it is clicheic (is that a word?) or not
if you like it, since you wrote it..., then who really cares
but i like it
and as most say in these
thank god for not kill kill kill die burn eat my fist ill rip your heart out shit
you can write good songs... that sounds like it could be a great song
get some kick ass music to it and damn - good shit
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