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Old 2004-12-01, 21:24
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bli'be'-- Now that you mention it I can see that. I never gave that style a thought. Good to know I got some emotion stirred. That's a positive thing for a writer.

gui'de'--You'd drop me and you know it.

My biggest thing I'm wondering about is the tenses I've used. If one of the grammar Nazi's around here would give it a once over I'd love to argue.
And there is one thing I will change now. I said southern winds and winter winds and I don't like that. Southern breezes sounds better.

Thanks for the comments. I appreciate it.
My eldest son's bipolar website:

-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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