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Old 2004-12-01, 11:35
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ill give you constrictuive critisism, seeing as ego inflating probably wouldnt help you improve.
not bad, but you seem to be mixing styles:
kind of cromatic shred metal notes with stoner rock paterns.
if thats what you wanted then ok, but it doesnt really work for me.
a backing track would help to get an idea of what your trying to do.
also fix your bending.
soloing ist just about playing, its about messages, and i didnt get any from.
if there were beautiful melodic bits, i missed them because of no backing track, not alot of anger either.

when i play, i think about what im trying to get across, and it shows though.
could you play pachabels cannon if you were burning with rage?
or domination while thinking about relaxing?
just my opinion
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