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Old 2004-11-30, 21:06
CarnalAltar CarnalAltar is offline
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Sounds pretty good for made in under 5 minutes. I like the tone. What's your rig and recording setup? I couldn't tell if your timing was off in spots, or maybe the drum loop was a bit inappropriate to what you were playing, which is probably hard to avoid.

If you want advice of something to work on, I'd say that when you break into fast picking, sometimes it didn't seem to make sense for where I thought the tune was going, so it didn't flow as well as it could have.

Keep it up!
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