2004-10-16, 17:38
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Post-whore
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Join Date: Aug 2001
Location: canada eh
Posts: 1,257
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go ahead man. I'm glad you like it.
You can tell I wrote it drunk. It jumps from past tense to present tense in the same sentence. Puncuating it would also clean it up a bit.
I read it the next day sober, and I kinda like it.
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Imagine there's no countries,
It isnt hard to do,
Nothing to kill or die for,
No religion too,
Imagine all the people
living life in peace...
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