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Old 2004-06-22, 10:04
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Due to the tortuous nature I'm not surprized that d_o liked it. I thought it was rather tasty ,too. Not quite serious mind you ,but sort of says what it needs to. Hey, when they're pointing fingers at you they point more at themselves. Don't let it get to ya. After graduation none of them matter anyways.
It had a good flow to it and was pretty smooth. The entrails line was the only one I thought could be a little better worded so that's minor.
Hey, just don't go snakeshit for real.
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