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Drag the Waters 2003-08-25 12:50

Slut Slayer, death metal
 
Here is a grotesque tale of killing a dirty harlot (probably influenced by my ex). Enjoy.

:behead:

"Slut Slayer"

scream my little pig,
your crying as i dig,
your grave is now your home,
sufficate, now die alone,
your skin is like butter,
as im cutting into you,
last plea a mutter,
when its stabbing through,
blood flows so freely,
your guts are on the floor,
the hunger within me,
cant wait anymore,

feel, the edge, of my knife,
know, its the end, of your life,
your so pretty, when you bleed,

you struggle but its pointless,
not much blood left to lose,
i ripped out your intestines,
and made a little noose,
your organs i will sever,
but you cant feel a thing,
gasping with pleasure,
death will only bring,
the end to your torture,
the end to all your pain,
the end of your future,
clogging up the drain,

feel, the edge, of my knife,
know, its the end, of your life,
your so pretty, when you bleed,

the time has come,
for you to die,
one final slice,
through your eye,
your mind is torn,
as i put you to rest,
you fucking whore,
you left me, with such a mess.

RUSSIANROULETTE 2003-08-25 19:45

Very very good. Very Chris Barnes-ish. I have a couple of songs like that myself...fucking ex-girlfriends, you hate them but with out them you can't write songs;)

Keep up the good work:beer:

ArkaneSoul88 2003-08-29 21:55

Quote:
Originally posted by RUSSIANROULETTE
Very very good. Very Chris Barnes-ish. I have a couple of songs like that myself...fucking ex-girlfriends, you hate them but with out them you can't write songs;)


haha so true.

The Doctor 2003-08-30 11:38

this one is magnificent!

Straker 2003-09-02 15:50

Cool as fuck. :drunk:

chris-o-fer 2003-09-05 20:25

pretty tight, man. now you have to send her a copy...

powersofterror 2003-09-07 18:04

I would send my ex that.;)

Alothrysis 2003-09-16 19:35

I'd say it would have fit in nicely on The Bleeding, good job

Tattered 2004-11-19 12:55

Nice and gory, well done.

Morbid+Roach 2004-11-20 11:04

Fucking brilliant! Kill the bitch, dude! :kaioken:

ArkaneSoul88 2004-11-20 15:23

Yes i fucking hate ex's. I want to do that exact same shit to mine.

andrewc 2004-11-20 19:18

i third that. drag, you're a pioneer. :)

Infinity 2004-11-20 21:47

Not bad!

cxmachine 2004-11-20 23:33

this has gotta go to music dude, it's fucking great

Drag the Waters 2004-11-20 23:54

thanks for digging this up, and all the props. shortly after posting this i came up with a chorus for it, so i've revised it.

Soulinsane 2004-11-21 05:27

Not bad at all!

WTF is wrong with you little young Illinois boys and your sycho women?

Brutur 2004-11-21 05:50

... lol, you are all so ironic

Soulinsane 2004-11-21 05:55

Why, what do you mean?

Brutur 2004-11-21 06:16

Itís brainless to talk about your ex girlfriends the way you do know. Yeah, maybe it was a fucking time with her, but no reason to write such an obstinate lyric, to appear so fucking brutal.

You are all so fucking stereotypes, and think metal is the music of all bad. Because of you, the metal scene is fucked up.

Back to the lyrics:
You didnít even use intelligent words, metaphors, similes and so on.

Thatís my opinion on this, if thatís not true, prove me better.

Soulinsane 2004-11-21 06:42

You are part right! Dudes must stop writing songs about thier beloved Illinois dick-craving, munching my cock behind thier back's sluts.

If you lose that slut to a bigger cock than just deal with it and don't write a God damn song about it and post it online :p I don't really give a damn if some easy slut country poontang broke some other poor country boy wanna B metalhead's heart, but I was just trying to help this poor Dicksnot lovering poster fan feel better about himself and the fact that he hasn't posted in months because he has been stuck up this sluts ass!... Perhaps after I :D


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