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Life, Passion, Art
Inspired by a girl who lost her passion but never told me what happened...here's what could've happened:
Once in love with the world But now she feels so numb about everything People disgust her She lost her passion Such emptiness inside of her Who can fill it Who can bring passion back into her Maybe a new love Maybe a lost love Maybe just a poem One person can give you the world And sometimes that same person can take it away Is that what happened to her Can a poem turn your world upside down Can a poem fill ur emptiness Can just a few words change your life completely Is that what happened to her Her face was an art Her smile was like summer And her eyes were like spring Now the face is not an art anymore And her smile is an autumn breeze And here eyes cold as winter freeze Comment!!! ~ˇLMSˇ~ |
It seemed a little sappy for the first bits, but that last stanza was beautiful. It was very pretty from my point of view. I might relook at this and create my own response.
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