Opinion on my screams (mini cover)
 

Hey guys , I been listening to metal for about 3-4 years now and I decided to start practicing and be able to scream. Please tell me what you think.

I tried vocal remover programs but they left traces of the original vocals. I am not good at audio programs but I hope you can hear my vocals fine. Let me know what I need to do. Better program ? Give more air to the screams ? Am I even doing it right .

Thanks for ur time.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ASLpI-Ub0n4

its my version of the finale of a song named Bite to break skin by senses fail.

Doesn't sound like you are screaming to me. You definitely need to work on your power. Stop holding back.

more power ? ok think i think i hear it in my voice the lack of breath to execute it right. I think its cuz I was tryin not to drown out the music. aight will work on it thnx.

Yeah worst thing you can do is hold back like that. Turn up the volume of the music if you are afraid of over powering it.