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xDarkestHourx 2003-03-03 11:51

3 Brand New Assterpieces From Me
 
You Got Knocked Down and Got Back Up...Then you Went Down Again. Stay There This Time

Cachexia sets in on the body housed in her closet
The secret hidden that hasn't quite become a skeleton
Degenerating only to unlock the door and reveal itself
Hollowed out, hornet infested eye sockets staring me in the face

When she opened her mouth, I spat down her throat
The pity train left at 6:00 PM
It's 7:35 now
So get the fuck out of my house


The Taste Of Genital Ichor In The Morning

She came in to get a little extra credit
Opening the door was the teacher
Sitting down, she noted the grin above his chin
"12 points is a lot to bring up"
"I think I can handle it"
Closng the door with her foot, she grabbed his collar
Stroking his balding head, removing fogged glasses
Who knew it was this easy to become a biochemist


Sometimes, I hate to say it, but, Anthropophagus Urges Just Become a Little Too Much

Would you still embrace me with a thorn in my side?
A two ended spear piercing a thoracic hotbed

...Oh wait, I see you have one, too.
Damn, that thing looks familiar...

Sharing a common enemy
Maybe I don't despise you after all
Get over here, ya big lug



so there's the latest installment of sarcastic/satiric work from the cynical kid down the street

Cheers,
x:sickface:x

Def 2003-03-03 13:28

w00t!

hah, those titles again :)

The Taste Of Genital Ichor In The Morning is my favorite, but I didn't quite get that last one!

powersofterror 2003-03-03 18:26

i think i must say the same thing, maybe cause i have never seen the word
Anthropophagus before.
and
the title of the first one sucks. in my opinion of course.
i would suggest quitting while you're ahead and pick it back up later,
because these titles are getting wierder and kinda crappier.
you need more like your signature.hehe.

xDarkestHourx 2003-03-04 16:08

Anthropophagous is essentially the same thing as cannibalism. Plus...you may not know this but making up song titles for me tends to get just a liiiiiittle more difficult after you've done over 60 of them like that...and the last set of lyrics just deals with an Osama/Hussein type deal where the US is the thorn in their side and though they despise eachother, they can come together to bring it down. Plus, this stuff isn't exactly intended for most of the people on the board. Most wouldn't get the titles or the ways they're displayed unless they had listened to a good deal of stuff by The Locust or Curl Up And Die, who coincidentally has my favorite song title of all time "Dr. Doom, A Man Of Science, Doesn't Believe In Jesus, so Why The Fuck Do You?"

Cheers,
x:sickface:x

powersofterror 2003-03-05 18:07

:scatter:

L,B'XXX 2003-03-06 09:56

I couldn't find the first word to the first piece in my dictionary, but I liked the hornet line a lot. It definitly gave me the heebee-geebees. The second was a sad as well as sarcastic commentary about some perverse 'teaching' methods that I know happen all too often. The later, once I knew your meaning, was quite good. I loved the end. And did you know Hussein has his poems on the walls of one of his residences and they're in gold ? I heard that on the news one day.
And your titles didn't bother me in the least.
Cool reads.

xDarkestHourx 2003-03-06 18:04

I'm not sure which word you were referring to but if it was Cachexia then that means the gradual degeneration of muscles and tissues, kinda like atrophy. If it was Ichor then that's a watery or bloody discharge. I dunno, I'm a nerd like that. Also, thanks for the comments

Cheers,
x:sickface:x


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