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Absence Of Nothing
Its been a while... Good to be here again...
Swallowed alteration delays in absence Sinking into the complexion of departure The ponds darkness whispering change Yet the deity’s wrath continues to condense He floats gravely still above the water Holding tight onto the grip of our hearts Dense thought, delusional fog Am I awake in a dream of oblivion? Conjured from the insanity of your entities I guard unstably in front of my own Whispering slowly into infinity I cower under darkness to stay in the light Slipping into the opacity of the unknown Listening to the music of each esoteric motion I fall asunder from the grasp of mankind Desolated, I disintegrate into the air of life Spirits gather at my arrival Into the forest I sing, one with my soul I am so alive in this indefinite reality But alone I walk surrendered to verity… -No Heart |
Hey, long time no see. :) This wasn't too bad. One line kind of messed with my head though. "Holding tight onto the grip of our hearts" doesn't sound like it's in the right order or maybe I'm just reading it wrong. Maybe " Holding tightly, gripping onto our hearts."
Lots of imagery in it. Good to see you post here again. |
Haha. I found this to confusingly switch between the more romantic imagery of some folk and black metal and the cybernetic, mathematical verbosity of Meshuggah.
The last verse even made me think of Native American sentiments. Nice one, I guess. :) |
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