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this poem is entitled "Police grabbin at my nuts"
Police grabbin' at my nuts
cause i'm a minority they feel it is justified I did nothing to deserve this nut-grabbing yet i still stand oppressed by the whiteman Fuckin' with me cause i'm a teenager with a little bit of gold and a pager What kind of world do we live in where a man can gets hit nuts grabbed by law enforcement Can't even walk down the street to get money from my bitches |
Horrible.
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"Just" in the second line would be the logical word instead of "justified", rhythmically and rhyme wise.
I'd also like to call you out on plagiarizing Ice Cube in the third stanza. I feel like you wrote this with the specific intention to piss people off in petty ways... not that you actually did or anything. |
A pager?????? hahahaha :rofl:
At least law enforcement don't have teeth like squirrels do. Now that's a song. This just made me laugh. No way on earth it's serious. Good for a giggle. |
You can try to satirize rap music all you want, but it doesn't change the fact that you're not funny and not good at it.
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nice...
funny poem. sounds like your town has a bad police force. ;)
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