Vocals feedback
 

i'm new here and i'd like to get some feedback on my vocals.
Candlemass vocal cover
i recorded it on a computer mic, the musics really quiet and the quality sucks, but it gives you a good idea of what i sound like.

what, no comments? i'm trying to go for a black metal rasp and i'd like to know if anyone knows any good techniques for improving it.

wow that raelly sucks your using horrible technique nvm the fact dm or bm rasps are some of the easiest things to do... sry buddy watch some more videos