New Song! please post
 

heres a new song i wrote. tell me what ya think.

Everything You Fear

Sometimes i feel so worthless,
Sometimes i feel like dirt,
Sometimes i feel i cant go on,
From all the pain and hurt. You'd do whatever you could,
For your money and greed,
Trade in the ones you love,
For the magic seed.

Chorus:
Everything you fear,
Lives inside of me,
Everything you really fear,
You cant really see.

Verse:
If your not beautiful,
You'll never be a star,
Small minded and hippocrits,
Are what the audience are. Your Bringing on your own fate,
Nothing can protect you,
From your own stupidity,
Theres nothing you can do.

Chorus:
Everything you fear,
Lives inside of me,
Everything you really fear,
You cant really see.

Outro:
The angel of death is here,
Everything you fear,
All you hold dear,
Will soon disappear. :flame:

this is average at best. its very repetitive, and the "angel of death" part doesnt fit well.