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Megadeth 2006-11-05 21:59

Machines of War
 
Penetrate the battle front
Bloodshed begins
Thermo nuclear vindicators
Will clarify their sins

Malevolent rage
The untethered core
Demoralized
MACHINES OF WAR

Havoc-released
Carnage-hostilities
Machines-unleashed
Atomic-capabilities

Bolt of missles-Thrash down
Laying waste-To your town
Nation laid to waste
Death has been embraced

Malevolent rage
The untethered core
Demoralized
MACHINES OF WAR

Havoc-released
Carnage-hostilities
Machines-unleashed
Atomic-capabilities

Pr0az 2006-11-06 00:14

Pretty cool man.


Bolt of missles-Thrash down
Laying waste-To your town
Nation laid to waste
Death has been embraced


I think you might want to substitute waste for something else in the forth sentence. Seems like it being used above kind of makes it not flow right!

Cannibal Carcass 2006-11-06 01:30

FUCKING AWESOME!

Megadeth 2006-11-06 17:30

thanks for the comments and ya im going to have to come up with a new line for the part you mentioned pr0az

tmfreak 2006-11-07 00:08

Really seems like an 80s british oi punk song to me. Reads and sounds like it.

low-tech 2006-11-07 11:02

thrash metal

L,B'XXX 2006-11-07 20:07

What about "Nation laid in ruin" for the line?

I liked the heaviness and power I was getting from it. Great flow!

Megadeth 2006-11-08 00:33

yeah i think ill use your suggestion LB,and actually my band is thrash/speed with some punk elements(gang vocals) were going to recrod sometime in the next three months maybe sooner!.Again thanks for the comments :cool:

tmfreak 2006-11-08 00:48

Quote:
Originally Posted by Megadeth
yeah i think ill use your suggestion LB,and actually my band is thrash/speed with some punk elements(gang vocals) were going to recrod sometime in the next three months maybe sooner!.Again thanks for the comments :cool:


Sounds almost slayerish.

Sounds cool man, i'll ahve to have a listen sometime.

L,B'XXX 2006-11-08 07:18

Glad to help out. :) Let us hear it if you record it.

Ludd 2006-11-12 11:10

Good job. You're definitely improving.

Megadeth 2006-11-17 00:04

thanks ludd and ill be sure to keep you all informed when i record.

Soulinsane 2006-11-17 00:20

Yeah.... Fuck yeah :beer:

deathxleprosyx 2006-12-07 20:14

sounds like megadeth to me

Megadeth 2006-12-13 19:40

Allitle update for everyone im going to start recording this weekend,im not sure when the demo will be ready but ill gladly ship some to anyone who wants them.


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