Dissection : The Grief Prophecy
 

Hey folks,
i tabbed out parts of "the grief prophecy" from dissection some time ago, and wanted to ask if anyone would look at it to tell me i'm not completely off :)

it's far from complete, and it's written pretty raw & basic... and this is my 2nd attempt at tabbing out something, so excuse me if it is incorrect :)
also, i don't have a clue about how much pause a space means...

i attached the file, thanx for any feedback