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Infinity 2006-10-28 11:07

Angel Girl
 
Her wings bright as the sun
Her halo clearer than light
But they're invisible to most
Save the man with insight
He sees the halo and wings
Amongst heavenly things
Only he justifies
Her venomous lies
She burns as dark as the Devils moon
Crashing hard as ocean waves
Committed as the militant starlight
To torment his pure heart
He tells me she's an angel
And I try not to listen

Pr0az 2006-10-28 11:59

Did a good job with metaphors and the stanza's man. Reminds me of the poems from the late 17th and early 18th century's.

L,B'XXX 2006-11-03 22:20

I thought I replied to this. Hmm. I got the same feel as Pr' did from it and I like that style. It sounds like it could be a spoken intro to a song. I've still got Strawbs in my head so i'm hearing stuff like that. Proggy and folksy combined.

CompelledToLacerate 2006-11-03 23:01

Quote:
Originally Posted by Infinity
Her wings bright as the sun
Her halo clearer than light
But they're invisible to most
Save the man with insight
He sees the halo and wings
Amongst heavenly things
Only he justifies
Her venomous lies
She burns as dark as the Devils moon
Crashing hard as ocean waves
Committed as the militant starlight
To torment his pure heart
He tells me she's an angel
And I try not to listen

Ok, I can comprehend this, I think..... It's about a man who sees the guilded shell of a woman instead of what she really is, and everyone else knows the truth but him.... am I getting there?

Your lyrics blow me away. I wish I could wrtie as well as you.

Infinity 2006-11-03 23:45

Yes, about in the start he saw her as an angel, although everyone else knew she was nothing but a cunt or whatever, and now he's sort of realised this, but cant bring himself, or doesnt want to break away from it "justifies the lies". he knows it now, and it causes him pain, but he either doesn't want to or cannot bring himself to stop seeing her.

timedragon 2006-11-05 04:24

the last two lines are my favorite part. well done.

Boslaive_33 2006-11-16 10:20

good shit u keep writing, i keep reading :uzi:

*insert name here* 2006-11-26 05:33

Quote:
Originally Posted by Boslaive_33
good shit u keep writing, i keep reading :uzi:

er..

bassist_of_light 2006-11-29 09:46

Quote:
Originally Posted by Infinity
Her wings bright as the sun
Her halo clearer than light
But they're invisible to most
Save the man with insight
He sees the halo and wings
Amongst heavenly things
Only he justifies
Her venomous lies
She burns as dark as the Devils moon
Crashing hard as ocean waves
Committed as the militant starlight
To torment his pure heart
He tells me she's an angel
And I try not to listen


nb man, a little emo-ish, but very well written. Im not a fan of lyrics about relationships but this isnt bad.


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