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morbid_death 2002-08-12 00:57

Covenant in Aphony - Its a newie, a critic would be nice.
 
i'm starting to feel like i'm fitting into these forums so im going to get a bit more serious about my song writing on this forum. here is a new one i wrote.

bold text - male talking voice
italic text - female talking voice
the rest is more of a black metal scream.
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-Covenant in Aphony

Tacirturnity and forbid thy tongue
Ingress my inner sanctum
Personal citadel proves no fort
Batter the walls, fall of the empire

My ghost stood on a wind swept path
Feeling the breeze as thistles stabbed
Looking around the blood soaked stone
Smiling red with steel glazed eyes
I hummed a mantra so foreign to bliss
Oh come oh thee garden of Hesperides

"Dejection woe and histories foe to claim her for my own
Seldom wept and yet it crept to shed their skin and render bleak"


Sombered hopes and morbid dreams the maladies of angels shun
Bastard Christ proved a hindrance, damnation in holy archetype
Doctrines in ancient text forge a fraudulent covenant
Deception bathed in blood knavery holy misanthrope

Moroseness, masochistic!

Stepping back with a dark steel heart
A fork in the road forces a part
Bardich of death forfills the dark
.....I am beyond the kin of men...

The phoenix is on the way
The wolves are gathering
The ravens are soaring high
The hunt begins...


"Glimmering stare the night is fair
Draw your sword and behold the hoarde"


Forge the steal and slay the deer
Watch in fear and eat the boar
The apple of life weeps its juice

I gave it my life
I gave it my all oh symphany


Walk through the trees
Unto the Earth!

I gave you my life
I gave you my all oh symphany


Praise the undead, the armies are on the way
Destroy the prince of white oh so bright

Unite and revive the pride
Step up cease to hide
Open the gates

AND ROAR TO THE HEAVENS!

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powersofterror 2002-08-12 08:53

:cool: melikes

morbid_death 2002-08-12 08:56

^ a man of many words :D

Gigantic Penis 2002-08-12 13:17

:birthday:

morbid_death 2002-08-14 07:16

Quote:
Originally posted by Gigantic Penis
:birthday:


errrr?

Snyper 2002-08-14 21:52

this is the best song i heard from u morb, it reminds me of saffrons curse for some reason, oh and stop watching the discovery channel man
:beer:

morbid_death 2002-08-15 21:23

lol, stop watching porn snyp


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