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Infinity 2005-01-02 09:35

Piece of Literature, not Mine
 
Just some stuff I wanted you guys to read. Theres some sort of message through this, and I've been trying to work out for a long time. But don't read it for that, read it because it's cool. I won't realease the whole thing in one post, I'll release it over a week because it's fairly long, I mean you'd read it in under 10 minutes, but its hysically long to put here, the page would be enormous. So here goes. Hope you guys like it.

"Well, there was this knife, more aptly described as a broadsword, and I see, well, I was swinging down the street on my way to a movie and this guy, yeah. He was about six foot eight and huge. He was holding this knife, only to me, I would describe it as a broadsword, something from the Knights of the Round. Before he can even open his mouth, he collapses. Meanwhile, I can barely lift a finger to put the toupee back on his glossy head because I'm shaking so much.
He was vomiting and I knew that he was alive because he kept saying something like 'durability' between convulsions. What happened next was really bizarre. Both ends of the street flood with black-suited men, just like in a movie.
These men look tough and pissed off, the eyes behind their sunglasses are probably cold as my hands are getting. I feel like my heart has stopped, I'm so damn scared. As they start to inundate the street in black, they move with one will.
I figure that I'm dead anyway, so I reach down for the blade. The blade is being covered by his vomit, but the hilt is clean. I can hear the men getting excited, but I can't stop. My fingers slide around the leather hilt which is oddly cold...

Infinity 2005-01-03 04:04

So the story is a little non Linear, but keep with it...

Seven hundred and sixty one armless and legless corpses float inconspicuously around the inside of hangar ninety six. I say that they are inconspicuous because it is their arms and legs which demand my attention. I did this, or I could have stopped it. Which is it? It doesn't matter now. I did this and could have stopped it, but nothing in nature ever follows a gaussian curve. Sure, they'll tell you that it does. They say that every five minutes someone dies in a car accident, but how often are there seven hundred and sixty one armless and legless corpses in one hangar?

Infinity 2005-01-05 04:05

I'm in the same street, and as I reach into my pocket for my keys, my eyes follow the blackened streaks of gum that pock-mark the sidewalk. The man is gone, and someone in sanitation cleaned up the aparitions and vomit in a real hurry. I hurry down the stairs heading for the subway, but my keys aren't in my pocket anymore. I'll have to get in through the side window.
The subway station is very bright and shining from the sanitation team that has been sweeping a swath in front of me. The concrete floor is losing years of tarnish, keeping only the protective layer of the gum streaks which make up constellations in an otherwise vacant sky.
The train arrives right on time, and just ahead of a mass of dark suited men who have been following me for what seems like years now. Between the sanitation and the suits, I must be going colorblind, but the train is here now, and those men, no, they won't catch me...

Infinity 2005-01-08 07:55

I should stop talking out loud, everyone on the train is looking at me now. I must have gone farther than I wanted because everyone here is different than me. Why should they care that I'm talking, some of them are talking and about fairly irrelevant things. 'The ends justify the means.' 'Where the is no justification, there is no end. There is only means.' I thought that they were looking mean, but they were only talking.
The noise in the train crescendoes as the train comes into a station, this station is lined with black suited men, and behind them I can see the pantomime of good and evil continue with the sanitation workers trying to mop the black suits off the sunglassed and toupeed men who are not resisting at all.
Indeed, they have nothing to worry about. They can just cling to the constellations of gum, there is nothing the sanitation workers can do about that.
Its all just human nature, we don't fit onto the curve, either. Simply, there is no curve, our science is approximation, good guessing.
The suits are going to get me this time, but I'm lucky. I have my keys in my pocket now, and I'm opening the other subway door...
I step in silently, and as is the ritual, I block the door with my bicycle and set the traps on the windows. Damn no way that anyone is getting in here without adequate warning. I figure that there is time now to take a good look at this knife that has caused me so much grief and to miss the movie that I was heading for but can't remember the name of.
Its not unusual, plastic about the length of my forefinger. It has two blades that open in both directions, one is a short and the other long. The long one is pretty dull, and the short one is quite sharp. Enough about the knife.
The door opens up, and the bicycle falls over. One of these suited guys is standing in the doorway, impassive and immobile. I'm not scared until I see that the hallway behind him is filled with his clones. I turn over the handle of the knife, and give it a bit of a nasty grin...
I'm back in the hangar again, but now they are all screaming at me. Their arms and legs are no longer attacting my attention. It wouldn't be so bad if they were talking, but they aren't. They could talk, too. They aren't screaming in pain, but in protest. They don't miss their arms or their legs. They all agree on one thing, they won't give me the satisfaction of hearing them talk, and I'll never forget their screaming, pointless and wordless, without justification.
(I did this and could have stopped it.)

Infinity 2005-01-08 20:56

My room is empty now, the men in the hallway are gone, replaced by the subtle odor of amonia destroying the bacterial rancidity of half eaten double helixes. On a plate on a table facing me is a simple arangement of carrots and asparagus built up like a log cabin.
A candle in the center of the round table is illuminating the edges of the cabin, a distant volcano throwing the light of nature. Around the edges of the flame is the face of a woman who is talking to me about subjects that I should know all about. For just a minute I think that the flame is a living metaphor for her soul, then I go back to thinking her one of the other manic statues, arms, legs, and mouths that move and mimic without purpose or understanding. Hundreds of bacteria eating off the sidewalk, fighting for procreation. I am disconcerted when I see her turning the knife over in her hands, checking its weight and proportions, and I tell her so.
Startled, she puts the knife back on the table to rest under the volcano which erupts in a flow of wax racing a torturous path onto the blade. One pulse of wax is followed by another as she turns the conversation towards our relationship. "Durability" is what she keeps saying. The word 'durability' and our relationship.
I reach over for the blade, and my fingers extend around the hilt. Again I am impressed by a chill. The wax comes off the blade with a simple scrape of my forefinger. "Durability" I say in response.
I feel a nervous chill run down my spine as I look up from the knife. My eye stops first on my plate, then on the wax pool which is solidifying around the edges, and finally on the face of this mysterious woman. She isn't trying too hard to look around the candle and neither am I. The candle flame makes a perfect line between the center of both of our heads. I laugh at the geometry of the moment, and thinking that I am laughing at her rhetorical comment she giggles in response.

Infinity 2005-01-09 11:11

I'm getting sick of coming back to hangar ninety six, but there is no avoiding it. This is what my existence needs. My existence is the demise of many others' arms and legs. The world is not a good place, nor is there innocence for me to hide in. Seven hundred and sixty one pairs of eyes look around the room aimlessly, and mine join the crowd. I see these bodies, massacred, immobile. For all the carnage here, the stench of decay is non-existent.
I try to turn away. The hangar spins but nothing moves, and my view is the same. I look, but don't see any sanitation workers, for that matter, I haven't seen the guys in suits since they dissapeared from my hallway.
I am getting nervous because her voice is carrying some emotional baggage with it, now. "Ever since you bought me that chewing gum, on a lark, I've been in love with you."
Sure, my response might have seemed a little cryptic, "If there is no justice, then how can the ends justify the means? Take that wax, for example, (I've started to ramble on now just like on the subway, and she is looking at me with that same look of hostility, bordering on the old familiar meaningless uncommunicative scream) when the candle was lit, did it know that in the end it was going to burn down to nothing and disappear into the air? You lit the candle to get the light from it. Your end was to have my asparagus and carrot cabin lit by this light. You used the candle as a means to obtain this. Does the light justify the destruction of the candle? What is justification to a piece of wax? Its the same as the justification that you've given me about this 'durability' and our relationship."

Infinity 2005-01-11 22:06

By this time, she had moved her face out of the line that the candle and the centers of our heads made, and she was looking down the aisle of a movie theater. This is an odd fact because she never sits in the aisle seat when we go to the movies. Her head falls to the other side, landing on my shoulder. Her disinterest in the movie becomes apparent when she begins to discuss our relationship in a loud whisper
I'm just as nice to my girl as the next guy, but I'm a little bored by now of all this talk, so I start to look around the theater without moving my shoulder too much. The back of the head in front of me reminds me of the guy from the street, the one who made me miss the earlier show of this movie. Only now, he's wearing a pair of sunglasses, and he's got his toupee back on.

obrien20 2005-01-12 08:31

Damn man, you can make a fucking good death metal album with that shit.

let me do the riffs... :p

Infinity 2005-01-12 08:36

I look behind me, and so it seems that the guy in front of me is the vanguard of sunglassed movie goers who all seem very interested in whispering and looking around. They remind me of a field of black tulips flickering back and forth in a howling wind. Their whispering picks up intensity, blurring out both their own speach and the voices in the film, until all at once my girlfriend mentions her ongoing rant-word 'durability'. "What is it with you and durability," the theater goes quite with the last sylable of the word.
Well, I'm a little bit nervious again; it's time to leave. I'm sure that the movie isn't over. Everyone in the room starts to mimic my behavior, all the suits reach for their stuff at the same time that I do. Only my girlfriend seems unperturbed.
I wonder how far this will go, so I reach under my seat, find a piece of gum, and drop it under my toungue. Mind you that this gum was under the seat for countless generations of movie fans. Sure enough, all these suits have done the same thing and are chewing on their own hardened bits of gum arabic. I almost start to laugh when they all simulataneously hurl up their masticulons covering them almost immediately with their black vinyl shoes which as impossible as it would seem, flatten the ageless gum into smears which will never be removed from this already gum-smeared floor.

Infinity 2005-01-14 09:12

It doesn't seem so funny, now, because I notice that the pattern that the gum makes on the floor is in the shape of the summer constellations, and that each suit sits on a pulsar pounding out its vibrant message across the lightyears and across the theater to my head: "Durability." I wish my girlfriend would know when to keep her mouth shut.
The dialog in the movie seems unimportant, and I decide that its time to leave. I tell her so, but she doesn't seem to hear me. Her mouth is chomping wildly on some gum, and between masticulations, she begins to tell me again about 'durability'. I lean back and slide my hand into my pocket, feeling for the knife
"Nice knife," repeats some snot nosed little brat.
I look into his face, and he sniffles. Those eyes look like a cat's eyes holding either universal understanding or nothing, whichever I decide. Right now his eyes hold nothing. We dance the double helix and make way for a sanitation worker pushing a wheeled bucket with his mop to the place where some other snot-nosed little brat recently used another brat's fist to exchange his running boogers for blood that spread in splatters and smudges over his hands and the floor.
The bloody boy and his one-fisted compadre had already been removed for corrective discipline by one of the controllers, our life-long friends wearing sunglasses. Here at school, they only seemed interested in bleeding noses, broken arms, measles, and sharp thrown objects. Otherwise, they remained impassive statues with feet grown into the anaesceptic environment in which they stood, needing as little attention as a plain white column in an all white room.

Ok guys the next is the last installment... Hope you enjoyed it, anybody?

Infinity 2005-01-15 22:01

Ok guys, the last part of the story.

It seems odd to me now looking back at them, or looking at them again at any rate, that they only reacted to our feces, blood and agony. Responsive only to distress, anger or misbehavior. But this was explained to me that day, even though I didn't understand it until now.
Am I surprised when the sanitation guy teaching that day turned his narrow slanted eyes in my direction and says what I've been hearing from the stars for years it seems, 'durability'. He mentions discipline and art, discipline is that which lets us practice our art. Durability of our abilities and disipline of our skills. We must need learn how to reproduce what we do and how we do it. He explains that the artist is more free to act when discipline has taught him his skills and limitations.

timedragon 2005-01-22 19:40

does your username have anything to do with the length of this story? :p
I liked it. Its intelligent. The suits reminded me of The Matrix though

Infinity 2005-01-22 19:50

Hehehe, well Im glad someone liked it, its been here for like 2 - 3 weeks now

timedragon 2005-01-22 19:55

I really just think its too long for most people just skimming through a forum, you know. Then again you got some people that will read a whole lot of pages on one topic, so...

G_urr_A 2005-01-31 13:53

I like it. Can't pinpoint what I like though, but something about it makes it feel nicely done.

Would you mind telling us who wrote it?

Infinity 2005-01-31 21:53

Im not exactly sure, although it appears in a series of computer terminals throughout the Bungie game Marathon. I guess they wrote it. I didn't really want to say that because it has some sort of meaning outside of the game. Saying that t was from the game, I thought people wouldn't really treat it as seriously.

Infinity 2005-02-12 01:50

Heres a new one for ya, guys.
 
This is another one, which is somehow related to the first. Enjoy :)

the autocrat's tale

Nicodeem, lord apparent of Onlai and junior autocrat, shivered in the easterly
wind. he tugged at his cloak absently and scanned the street a second time,
turning his back into the wind and wrapping all four arms around his narrow
chest. Nicodeem hunched his shoulders and tried to hide his nearly three meters
of height in the lengthening shadows. he stared back down the ancient
thoroughfare, thick with lush green moss and clutchweed blowing in the wind.
the wispy, rootless plants wavered this way and that, pulled by the constant
breeze: sometimes southerly, sometimes northerly, but always to the east.

there was a skittering of dust in the oblong opening of what might have been a
door for whatever creatures had built the ruins, and Nicodeem flicked a pair of
silvered specs down over his eyes, blinking as the light polarized and the
street sharpened suddenly. it was the poly.

it never ceased to amaze the junior officer how the poly managed, despite his
squat, clumsy legs and huge, bulbous skull, to leap unerringly from stone to
stone. Nicodeem reached with a lower hand to the inside pocket where he kept
the pistola and slipped long, delicate fingers into the grip. never could be
too careful with the thetes, especially the polys_they were unsound, and usually
addled in the skull, too. but so far Murgo had been very reliable.

in the crisp filter of the specs, he could pick out the object for which the
effort and money of the last few weeks had been daringly spent, a thin,
reinforced, tranparent tube containing no more than two fingers of a pale,
yellowish syrup. but if the syrup, when analyzed, proved to be the serum that
was proof against the lues plague, and poison against the luetic infestation
that had been crawling up from the ruins every night, Nicodeem's promising
career in the assembly was secure for all time.

Infinity 2005-02-12 01:51

Again, I ll release this over a week or so aswell. Don't worry be happy \:d/

Infinity 2005-02-13 01:58

he raised one thin arm and stepped out of the shadows, waving the poly on, while
tracking him with the specs and the snub nose of the pistola from beneath his
cloak. a few minutes later, he'd closed the 50 meters between them with a
bounding stride and was examining the tube nervously in the light of the poly's
lamp. he handed over the agreed sum and ruffed the misshapen head, not seeing
Murgo's sullen, embarassed glare at the familiarity. he tucked the tube safely
away and asked about the factor who'd been carrying it: he'd bribed several
layers of secretaries in the office of a prominent autocrat to get the
information.

he'd discovered a lone factor, the black robed priests of Aglaia and all the
known cities, hand carrying a small container of medicine: nothing out of the
ordinary about the ministrations of a country factor, seeing to the thetes and
polys working the fields. but this factor was from off city, lately of Plataea.
the information that Nicodeem had paid so dearly for was this_the factor had
arrived from Plataea, but not before the Vaan attack that burned the city to ash
and sent its people scattering. this factor had arrived secretly, after the
Vaan had taken the city and sent it spinning upwind, into the starved altitudes
where they flitted their twisted lives; never touching solid ground except to
raid and burn.

Infinity 2005-02-15 03:20

but what Nicodeem had ferretted out, was a plot, scarcely believable, that the
factors themselves let the plague run rampant on Aglaia, the better to weaken it
and put the city of Ithaca on the rise. if his informers were right, the serum
was destined for a secret clave of factors hidden in the wilds outside the city,
and was proof from the spore infection which followed every encroachment by the
luetic creatures.

the greened, weathered tiles dimpled twice, sending dust and cracked mortar into
the air before Nicodeem jumped and realized he was being shot at. the poly had
already rolled away and was running for the door_Nicodeem yelped and yanked the
trigger of the pistola, shredding his cloak and felling Murgo with a staccatto
burst. Murgo squirted blood and struggled to one knee, whipping a monoblade
around and facing the shadow standing in the door.


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